Simply put, a fantastic ghost story. Like a horror film from the 80s updated and put in novel form.
Three things I learned about writing:
- 3rd person omniscient works only if you stay out of characters’ individual perspectives. Say what happens, and report what they think, but as an outsider
- Tragedy for a minor character has more impact if we spend some time with them first, however little, to see how they act normally
- Remember that characters only know what they see, and that can mislead them sometimes. That’s okay. Let them be wrong when they should be wrong, so that when they’re right it’ll feel like triumph.
Sent the novel out to my first pick agent this weekend. I know it’ll most likely be rejected — it’s my first real stab at a query letter — but I’ve got to start somewhere.
Also got back another rejection of one of the stories I’ve been circulating. I didn’t waste any time worrying about it, though. I picked another market, and sent it right back out.
While waiting for rejections, I’m rewriting one of the stories I wrote last month. The feedback I got on it was positive, but in fixing the problems the reviewers pointed out, I discovered a different story sitting under the one I was writing.
Same characters, same themes, but a different plot.
I have a feeling this version will turn out much better than the first two, but the only way to find out is to write it 🙂
Finished the final editing pass for the last few chapters of my first novel early this week.
So now it’s time to build a list of agents to look at, and start querying.
I’ve been going to Publisher’s Marketplace every morning, researching another agent to add to the list. This weekend I’ll pick one, get my query letter in order for them, and send it off.
It’ll feel good to get the book out there. Even if every agent rejects it. True, the rejections will hurt…but there’s no way to get published without getting some.
And, now that the first book’s done, I can turn my attention to the second novel I wrote, and start putting together an editing plan for it. There’s also the short stories I wrote over the last month to edit (one may need a complete rewrite).
So much to do, and thank goodness!
Only four chapters left in the final editing pass for the novel.
I’ll be done early next week. Thank the gods.
Then it’ll be time to gather a list of agents to send it out to, polish up my query letter, and start emailing the thing out.
It’s been…two years? almost three?…since I started work on it. And soon, very soon, I’ll finally have a finished version to send.
So, what have I learned? What lessons will I apply to the next book?
- Definitely break up your editing passes. Trying to fix every problem you see as you see it will only lead to a mess.
- Don’t be afraid to edit the story. Your first take on the story — not just the words, but what happens and why — doesn’t have to be the last one.
- You’ve got time to get it right. Take as many editing passes as you need. No one has to see it until it’s ready.
Wife made it back from Arkansas on Tuesday (huzzah!), so my hermit-writing time is coming to a close.
Overall, I think having the weekly goals really helped me. While I didn’t hit them all (mumble mumble agent-search), I hit enough of them to build up a writing rhythm, and got a lot done.
All told, I’ve:
- written two new short stories, and have started a third
- circulated three previously-written stories
- completed final-pass editing of all but the last quarter of my first novel
- reviewed nine submissions by litreactor peeps
I’d like to keep up some of my new habits. I think the litreactor reviews help me to see similar problems in my own fiction, and practice fixing them. I also think the chapter-a-day editing is the only way I can get detailed editing passes done.
I like writing a new short story every week, but at some point I’m going to need to work on editing them all into shape, so I can submit them. So I’ll keep that one for perhaps the next week or two, then settle into editing what I’ve got.
Third and final week. How’d I do?
- Edit one chapter a day: Check. Whew.
- Write a new short story: Check! Last week’s story is up on litreactor for feedback. Newest story will be going up as soon as I have the points.
- Critique two stories: Check and check.
- Find a new potential agent for querying: Dropped.
- Polish and submit a new story each month: Still on track. Got some good feedback on “Wednesday” from the fine folks at litreactor. I’ll revise it this weekend, and should have it ready for submitting by the end of the month.
Two weeks in. Had a holiday in the middle of this one, so…how’d I do?
- Edit one chapter a day: Mostly check. 5 days out of 7 isn’t too bad.
- Write a new short story each week: Done. First draft of “Wednesday” is complete and ready to submit to litreactor. Draft of second story is coming together.
- Critique two stories each week: Check. This has become the easiest one to do.
- Find a new agent to query each week: Nope again. I might need to drop this one, till the editing is done.
- Polish and submit a new story each month: On track. Hope to get feedback on “Wednesday” soon, and then will revise and start submitting. Also got a rejection back for one of the stories I’d submitted, so I need to send it out again this week.
Fantastically well-done. Weaves together magic, fairies, Great War trauma, romance, sisterly rivalry, and the treatment of special-needs children into one cracking good story.
So very happy to discover there are sequels.
Three things I learned about writing:
- Dribble out your backstory. At the start, offer just enough to explain the choices that brought the character to that point. Introduce the rest later, as needed for the story.
- You can get away with a romance between two characters that have little in common if you make their raw attraction clear and compelling.
- Sometimes the greatest climaxes (or turns in the story) happen when the protagonist realizes something about themselves that they didn’t know before.
Last week I set some goals to keep me on track for a productive summer.
So, how am I doing?
- Edit one chapter a day: Check. I’m working through the novel backwards this time, to keep it fresh for my editing eyes.
- Write a new short story each week: Not complete, but new story (working title: Wednesday) is halfway done, and I’ll wrap it up this weekend.
- Critique two stories each week: Check. By the time the new story’s done, I should have enough points to post it to the litreactor workshop for feedback.
- Find a new agent to query each week: Nope. Need to set aside some time next week to do this.
- Polish and submit a new story each month: Check. I’ve currently got three short stories making the submission rounds, one of which I submitted for the first time this month.
Another strong portrayal of a villain from Grossman.
Avoids the trap of completely rehabilitating Nixon. He’s sympathetic without being likable, and interesting to follow without the reader always cheering them on.
Loses steam in the second half. There’s plot lines that go nowhere, scenes that could have been cut without changing anything, and the climax happens completely off-screen, with no buildup or release of tension.
Still, I learned a few things about writing:
- Delivering most of your plot via dialog — so long as you’re not data dumping — can be a great way to keep the story moving.
- The best villains think they’re the hero.
- Restricting your book to one POV can be too confining. Multiple POV can let you explore other aspects of your world, which you might need if your story takes place somewhere very different.