Ron Toland
About Canadian Adventures Keeping Score Archive Photos Replies Also on Micro.blog
  • Parable of the Talents by Octavia E. Butler

    Prescient, gripping, and intimidatingly good. Definitely going to read more of Butler’s books.

    I’m rather sad that she wasn’t able to complete a new Earthseed series, like she planned, before her death.

    Three more things she taught me about writing:

    • Perfectly acceptable to have the sequel start out as more "and then this happened".
    • First act turn is a great place to upend what the characters have built previously, have the outside world come in with the force of a storm.
    • Editors and compilers of biographies can have agendas just like other characters, and become more interesting when they reveal them
    → 7:00 AM, Mar 6
  • The Parable of the Sower by Octavia E. Butler

    Eerily prescient. Takes place in a California where water is scarce, most government has been privatized, and the President uses racial politics to push through reforms that weaken protections for workers and the poor.

    Felt all too familiar. And she predicted all this over twenty years ago.

    I usually don’t like post-apocalyptic books, especially ones that go in for the “slow apocalypse” where everything just collapses over time as people stop taking care of the things that keep civilization going. It’s depressing reading, but Butler’s writing is so compelling, I had to see it through.

    Three things I learned about writing:

    • Scarcities in society will be reflected in the social order. If food is scarce, being fat is a sign of wealth. If water is scarce, being clean (taking baths) will be seen luxurious. In both cases, being poor and engaging in "rich" behavior will be seen as uppity.
    • There's life in the hero's journey yet, if explored from different angles. Here the young protagonist grows up in a small town, yet feels called to greatness, then compelled to become a leader when driven out of their home.
    • Adopting a diary structure can let you skip past boring parts of the story will zooming in on the important ones. A well-written diary will do that, and still give you a chance to convey the rhythms of life, since it's the story the person is telling themselves, as they live it.
    → 7:00 AM, Feb 15
  • RSS
  • JSON Feed
  • Surprise me!