Ron Toland
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  • Lustlocked by Matt Wallace

    Brilliant. Wallace’s writing is as lean and focused as ever, keeping the action moving and the laughs coming.

    Three things I learned about writing:

    • Background action can be sped up, to keep focus on foreground.
    • It's ok to stand up and cheer for your characters once in a while. It gives readers permission to cheer for them, as well.
    • Seeing the consequences of a weird event (transformation, spell effect, etc) before seeing the event itself can make its eventual description less confusing and more interesting.
    → 6:04 AM, Aug 29
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