Ron Toland
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  • Keeping Score: February 12, 2021

    This book may end up being much longer than I thought.

    It's currently at 29,122 words, which is almost half of the 70K or so I thought it would end up being. The trouble is, I'm not even close to being halfway done.

    The section I'm working on now, just by itself, is 16,000 words long. And it's not near done, either. I'm maybe....halfway? through the story I want to tell in this part of the book. And this section is only meant to be about one-fourth of the whole, so that would put the final word count at around 120,000 words (!)

    That would make it a third longer than the longest thing I've ever written in my life.

    I swear, I'm not eating up word count spinning needless metaphors or having characters do a lot of navel-gazing. It just turns out that yes, when writing a novel that moves from the lakes and forests of northern Sweden to the neverending sky of the Central Asian steppe, there's a lot of, um, ground to cover. Who knew? (Narrator: He did. Or should have).

    Granted, a lot of what I'm writing now might be cut out. Some of it is no doubt redundant, or can be compacted so that the events of a few pages get covered in a few paragraphs. But even lopping off 20,000 words of filler would make this a 100K book.

    100K is about 400 pages, which...well, that's a commitment, isn't it? For reader and writer alike.

    So much for being done with the first draft before April. This might end up taking me the rest of the year.

    Maybe it's time to look at bumping my daily word count? Trying to squeeze in a second writing session in each day? Or I could start writing on the weekends again. Just two extra days of my regular word count would be an extra 500 words a week.

    Or perhaps it's best to be patient. Work on this draft during the week, like I have been, and use the weekend to edit other stories (and that previous novel, which needs a tune-up before going out).

    What about you? What do you do, when a story you're working on starts to look like it'll be much longer than you anticipated?

    → 9:00 AM, Feb 12
  • A Tale of Two Cities by Charles Dickens

    Another classic that I just never got around to reading before.

    And it’s deservedly a classic. Dickens absolutely skewers the ruling classes of three societies: his native England, pre-Revolutionary France, and the post-Revolutionary Terror. The snarky political commentary makes his dips into melodrama excusable.

    Three things I learned about writing:

    • You can write in the third-person POV without insight into any characters' thoughts or feelings at all, only their actions and words.
    • Admitting that there is a narrator telling the story (while standing outside of it) gives you a chance to comment on the action, not just tell it.
    • Even if readers can anticipate a turn in the story, if the characters don't know it's on its way, you can generate tension just in putting off the moment that that event happens.
    → 6:00 AM, Jul 17
  • The Golem and the Jinni by Helene Wecker

    Reads like a nineteenth-century fairy tale. Manages to weave these mythical characters into a bigger story about the immigrant experience in 19th century New York. Wonderfully well-done.

    Taught me a few new things about writing:

    • You can use multiple perspectives to build tension into the narrative, by giving the reader access to thoughts and feelings that impact the main characters later on.
    • It's okay to give opinionated descriptions. In fact, letting your character's perspective color the way they describe the world around them is a great way to make both feel more real.
    • Even an absurd premise, if taken seriously enough, can become drama.
    → 10:00 AM, Jan 4
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